J. Scott Olsen, "Shameless"

Here's my pop tune. As of this writing there are lots of rough things about it, but I think it's enough to paint a decent picture. I called it "Shameless" and it currently includes an intro, a verse, a brief transition, and a chorus. I've learned that most successful pop is a good hook plus a good groove plus some unique sound elements or effects or timbres. (Think of "Billy Jean": 1. super-memorable chorus, 2. tight, consistent, simple groove, and 3. those string runs and little trumpet parts.) I tried to do all three here.
No, I'm not trying to compare myself to Michael & Quincy, of course...